Life Times

Loved him but didn’t like him
Something about settling
Spinning her wheels
And It didn’t feel right
especially at night

And life,

Gives you a deal like
It’s a funny thing when you feel
Like it’s already been felt
as good as feels good can feel
Less than you bargained for


And then what’s next I guess
everything’ll work itself out
through behavior patterns
and the limbo charades
Looking looking looking

And life,

Ends up falling out of love
Evolution takes change
adding up what makes sense
Sometimes going broke
Along the way


Trying to like back into love
Like falling falling falling
Until they have to get back up
And evolve


And life……..


3 thoughts on “Life Times

  1. Best first line ever! Lots of questions about this piece. Where were you when you thought to write this? There is tension, uncertainty, unanswered, answered and open ended scenarios… Can one believe that the Questions stanza and the lines in the Life fourth stanza can be positively rectified and/or forgiven? As the comment above poses in its statement “…a [Time to write some happy endings] ?

    • Hey, thanks for the comments/questions…… So, it’s not really about where I’m at or was at, I’m just sharing it. It’s more about where the reader is at when it’s read, and if it makes any sense- then that’s what it’s about….

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